CommentsDevious Commentshey johnny thank you very much for taking the time to critique this piece i appriecate it very much... typically when someone takes the time to comment or critique i like to respond with answers or questions since i am very new at this coloring thing.
i think Nei was 100% right with the background colors and the moon... to tell you the truth like i told her was that i did color it (though it looked like shit) but i choose not to up-load with it.... it was too distracting and buzy plus i think the colors that i used didn't flow or even feel right to me. so in saying that i am going to go back and color the background and the moon after i finish the bat-girl piece i working on now, plus i just finished a couple of commissions and am trying to get permission to post but don't know whether or not i will be able to pull those ones off. you thought spidey was flat? hmmm that is one that i haven't gotten yet but i can see what you are talkin about a little maybe due to the fact i really didn't high-light him that much at all. and for the ahh spawn's green blast reflections i had originally thought about that but i am always afraid of over-doing it with high-lights and reflections so that explains some of the reasons why you don't see too much in my colored pieces. color holding...you know what i didn't know what that was/is i have watched and read a couple of tutorials but haven't used it yet since i am new but i will definately try it if you really think that it would improve this piece..... if your now one of my watchers i will try and message you when i complete this piece.... also would love to get your imput on the bat-girl once i complete it..... thx again rich -- ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- *****commissions open ***** --> message or note me <-- check out my gallery: ([link]) latest news: [link] |
With that being said, your coloring is okay. Spidey looks pretty flat to me though. I'd use a ton of reflections off of Spawn's glowing greeness. From the position of his hands and the fact this is at night, most of the front of Spawn would be lit. Chest, thighs, some of his cape too. Spidey's left side and the back of his right leg would be affected by it as well. All of these areas would help pop them off of the dark background without their colors looking "colorful saturated shiny".
On a final note, try using some color-holding. It would help in some areas, like the webbing and Spawn's hands and Kirby dots.
I'd finish this up if I were you, yer almost there! Great start, keep us posted!